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LOOK INSIDE IF YOU DARE
ever wonder why it doesn't get better?
LOOK AROUND IF YOU CAN
the answers are in plain sight
STAND UP & FACE YOUR LIFE
please enjoy.
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I really like the style you chose to write this in. It forces you to look around, as the reader is supposed to reflect similarly. And with the way it's separated, it allows you to explore yourself as you explore the full meaning. Like on the right side, I read, "Look inside, look around, stand up." "Ever wonder the answers?" and on the left, "If you dare, if you can, face your life." "Why it doesn't get better? Are in plain sight." I personally would fudge the grammar a bit to make that fit more, but it's definitely a playful, and reflective piece.
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